Have you ever heard of 30 Day Challenge?
For those who do not know 30 Day Challenge is you have to plan resolutions and do it for 30 days!
I will tell you my 30 Day Challenge and maybe you can try it too.
First of all, the habit I want to add is to read 3 pages of Bible everyday. It may be for another 1 year or so but reading the Bible not only 1 page but 3 pages can make a big change.
and I want to add a habit of reading 1 book everyday. It maybe hard but I want to mount my books to my height and than start all over again. so with a little bit of extra times I could make my height book pyramid in less than 159 days.
The habit I want to add most is studying math an hour each day. It's going to be hard but I know that with an hour of spending my study time on math, my math skill will emprove.
That was the 3 things I want to add in my 30 Day Challenge habits I want to ADD.
Secondly, I want to subtract in my habit is I want to subtract my habit of doing facebook.
Whenever I do computer I want to do facebook and than the next second, I am logged in in facebook.
but I want to take out my facebook habit.and inspead talk with my friends or do something important.
and I want to make a habit of no sugar. It might be hard but I am getting too much of weight everyday so I want to make a habit of no sugar.
And lastly, I want to subtract the habit of saying bad words. I know I should not use it. but every time when I get fustrated I use a bad word. so instead of saying bad words I can say good words instead or count to 10 and just relax, calm myself down.
So in the next 30 days I will try my best of best to keep my 30 Day Challenge.
Thank you for your time <3
-30 Day Challenger, Lucy S Jeon
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
FIX:
답글삭제Again, make this into a paragraph.
line 1: 30 Day Challenge (capitalize)
line 2: "know," (add a comma), space after "30"
line 2: is that -> is a challenge in which
line 2: resolutions -> goals, erase "than"
line 4: take out "So" (usually do not write "so" at the beginning of a sentence)
line 5: the habit ... add is -> I want
line 5: reading -> to read
line 6: add "only" after "for"
line 6: so, but (add comma)
line 8: and -> Also,
line 8: maybe hard -> may be hard,
line 8: mount -> pile
line 9: than -> then
line 9: erase "so", capitalize "With"
line 9: times -> time
line 10: take out "height"
line 12: emprove -> improve (spelling)
line 13: That was -> These were
line 13: take out "habits I want to ADD"
line 14: take out "is I want to subtract my habit"
line 15: add comma after "facebook"
line 15: than -> then
line 17: take out "but"
line 17: take out my facebook habit -> erase my habit of doing facebook,
line 17: inspead -> instead (spelling)
line 19: and -> Furthermore,
line 19: to make ... sugar. -> to get away from the habit of eating foods with lots of sugar.
line 19: add comma after "hard"
line 19: take out "of" after "much"
line 20: everyday so -> everyday. Therefore,
line 20: make ... sugar. -> get away from eating too much sugar.
line 21: And lastly, -> Lastly,
line 21: it. but -> it, but\
line 22: take out "when"
line 22: take out "so", capitalize "Instead"
line 23: take out "instead"
line 23: take out "relax,"
Minor mistakes here and there. You just need to work a little bit on your sentence structure. Do not use words like "and" or "so" at the beginning of a sentence.
You're really academic! Your 30 day challenge is read, read, study, no sugar, and no bad words. You would become a great person if you keep all this, but sometimes it's better to do what you want to do!
Also, I should also get into the habit of reading the Bible. Nice to meet you!
Thank you for fixing all my mistakes. I'll try to fix all the mistakes but it won't be easy...
답글삭제Thank you for the comment and nice to meet you too :)